The chart below show the proportion of the energy produced from different source in a country between 1985 and 2003
The pie chart compares the percentage of various six source, which contributed the energy to a nation in 1985 and 2003.
Overall, it can be seen that, in both year percentage of energy produced by oil dropped significantly in country over the period shown were as percentage of gas increased.
Firstly, the highest proportion of energy had been produced by oil, which was 52% in 1985, it then after slumped significantly to 39% in 2003, while percentage of gas had been rose 10% in 2003.
Secondly, in 1985 the percentage of energy producing went on 22%, although the equivalent figure in 2003 was 17%. The hydrogen had same proportion of energy in both year at only 4%.
Thirdly, other had produced extremely lower amount of energy in 1985 followed by 3% rising in 2003.Besides this, in 1985 coal contributed 12% energy and after it produced 10% higher energy to nation in 2003.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92105263158 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71142039419 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559210526316 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2905219647 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 5.23603664747 264% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312943762116 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167463895197 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555860824989 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185388487502 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053419444674 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.