The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
These bar charts illustrate the percentage of people in the different age structure in France and India in the year 1984.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the age group 0-5 years old in India, both boys and girls accounted for the largest proportion in the chart shown, at nearly 7%, while this figure was nearly doubled as high as those born in France in the same year. However, the percentage of the Indian population in the increasing age groups is gradually decreased yearly and end up the age group 70+ which both men and women at a similar percentage (roughly 1%).
By contrast, the French people have occupied almost the same percentage in each age group until aged 35, at approximately 4%. This is followed by the next age group at over 3.5% before and slightly fell yearly until aged 85, at 0.2% for male and 1.5% for female.
Overall, it is clear that although India has high birthrate than France, the total lifetime was shorter than France. Comparing with the Indian that so close percentage of people in each age group, while the French were different by the gender in the elderly.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71859296482 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37787755342 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4117620617 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25646159014 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129711790123 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108825491168 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184257189523 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12102985253 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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