The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Essay topics:

The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The rendered pie charts depicts the information about the water usage three different areas such as industrial, agricultural and household in six different regions of the globe.

Overall, the consumption of H2O in farms was highest. Whereas least amount of water uesd least for domestic purposes.

A glance over the graph immediately reflects,in farming, the use of water in South America was the addition of North America and Europe accounted for 71%. However, consumption of water for domestic area was maximum in South America as compared to rest of them. Besides this, 48% water used for industrial area in North America which was 5% less than Europe.

Turning towards rest of the description, it quite interesting to note, consumption of water for agriculture in Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia was above 80% each which amounted to 84%, 88% and 81% respectively. Amazingly, nearly as South East Asia use H20 as Central Asia in household use with 7% anyhow water usage in Central Asia for industrial purposes was minimum as compared to others.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, whereas, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12643678161 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71799588879 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4345583397 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268390650739 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119771397657 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682203764091 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156474957208 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617354610534 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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