The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

Essay topics:

The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts illustrate the amount of water consumed by three main purposes namely industrial use, agricultural use and domestic use in 6 different regions.

Overall, the agricultural industry uses the largest amount of water in most countries surveyed; whereas the figure for domestic use contributes the least. Units are measured in percentages.

In three areas namely Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia, the amount of water used by agriculture is significantly large, above 80%. The figure is then followed by that of South America, accounts for 71%. Meanwhile, the percentage of water used by farming in North America and Europe is just over one-fourth of the total.

The percentage of water used for industrial use contributes largely to two big developed areas, which are North America and Europe. The figure for the former is nearly half of the total, while that of the later is 5% higher, at 53%. The industrial field in the remaining regions does not consume much water, just around 5% to 12%. Finally, water consumption for domestic use accounts the least, below 15% in all areas shown.

Votes
Average: 8.5 (4 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13186813187 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68435695274 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565934065934 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5371044282 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347856981714 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129672370545 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872130514318 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221473250636 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535772365153 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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