Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss

It is increasingly common these days that both top level authorities and thier emploees work closely. While there's are some believe that getting ideas and suggestions from the lower lever employee is superfluous, I strongly believe that top level authorities should accept the lower level employee's suggestions and ideas.

Top level employees must take suggestions and ideas from their low level employees to make the company better place. Because some time the ideas from the low level workers is more significant than the suggestion from a top level employee. For instance, according to a recent study, ideas from the low level employees can help the company. It exemplifies, that top authorities should take employees suggestions and ideas to give the importance to the employees and they will give their best.

Moreover, peace can be maintained when lower level employees suggestions heard by the top level managers. These days, its common that peace within the company is not maintained due to the differences between the employees. For example, an Australian company have rule in their organization to listen to all their employees to maintain peace within the company. Thus, it helps the company a peaceful place.

In conclusion, this essay discussed how a company can be made a better and peaceful place when the managers take ideas from their team-mates. In my opinion, top level authorities should take lower level employee's suggestions.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
... and thier emploees work closely. While theres are some believe that getting ideas and...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oyees to make the company better place. Because some time the ideas from the low level ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30735930736 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77272642788 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471861471861 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5102010473 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.479288400943 0.215688989381 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198280948563 0.103423049105 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1369997663 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32162988106 0.15604864568 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115964198731 0.0819641961636 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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