The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented diagram elucidate how electricity can be generated with the help of geothermal energy and to process this geothermal power plant has gone through to five-step of procedure

The key element which requires to start the process is chilled water that has to pump down under 4KM to the injection well. Thereafter, through the injection well the water flows to the geothermal zone between the hot rocks because of that cold-water get converted to hot water. Further, the hot water again pumped up to condenser which makes it transform to steam, Taking power by the steam the turbine makes the energy which flows to the generator and through it generate the electricity at the end produced electricity send it to the electric tower.

Overall, The geothermal plant needed water substance to manufacture electricity, to sum up, the electricity making process consists of different steps: heating the water by hot rocks, transfer the water to the condenser and then put it in the generator to create power energy.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (14 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'starting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: starting
...ure The key element which requires to start the process is chilled water that has t...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, well, as to, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11904761905 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68994937952 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0931568483 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 215.0 112.824112599 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 22.9334400587 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139500633844 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088093630398 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476113700785 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1084395788 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434543795393 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.2329268293 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 61.2550243902 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 11.0658536585 217% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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