Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of product producers to avoid extra packaging of products.
People have different opinions to avoid packing products. One group argues that it is individual responsibility but the other group says it is manufacturer responsibility to control the extra package. In my personal opinion, both of them should take initiative and stop such kind of wastage.
First and foremost thing who ever produce and sell packing items, they must consider environment safety. As we are very much aware the major problem in our society is due to lot of garbage. I have read few articles on this issue, as they were requesting to change the packing style. As we know how much money, effort we are spending to recycle the waste items. I have read news on this topic. As few countries were encouraged companies who ever follow garbage recycling process.
Secondly Individuals must not encourage over packed products. As we know how it is creating problems in terms of global warming. Recently one of the city started charging amount based on their wastage, as they need to spend a lot of effort to recycle this. We must create awareness with the help of social media, how we can avoid or ban these kinds of products.
Final conclusion of this issue, everyone must own the responsibility to reduce over packing products. There are proven facts available to get self motivation and predict the over package related things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ity to control the extra package. In my personal opinion, both of them should take initiative an...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... they must consider environment safety. As we are very much aware the major proble...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... items. I have read news on this topic. As few countries were encouraged companies...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ust not encourage over packed products. As we know how it is creating problems in ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25702811245 0.268076937826 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.18875502008 0.116061578633 163% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0883534136546 0.0759168565197 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0200803212851 0.0366838410393 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0722891566265 0.0131127313244 551% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100401606426 0.155750635184 64% => OK
Participles: 0.0361445783133 0.0379272487307 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64076983372 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0361445783133 0.0210936926555 171% => OK
Particles: 0.00401606425703 0.00175180941692 229% => OK
Determiners: 0.0642570281124 0.0948980150116 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0240963855422 0.00437022459523 551% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0200803212851 0.00967000014798 208% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1346.0 1161.00487805 116% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.9 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9295154185 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73763899035 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356828193833 0.337110787985 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259911894273 0.247514529752 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185022026432 0.171178102325 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101321585903 0.112407865282 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64076983372 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629955947137 0.546246751206 115% => OK
Word variations: 66.3624728961 49.3433353143 134% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 8.93414634146 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1333333333 23.0094962315 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9597230451 42.9750493124 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 135.714022679 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 23.0094962315 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.689975730869 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.48048780488 270% => OK
Readability: 41.1245227606 47.7609492067 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.4 2.94281807926 48% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288170464609 0.418131533498 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0492739257977 0.181151798455 27% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0493385947213 0.0850326197045 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470144223078 0.706616315825 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138582886935 0.157042692854 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10130572238 0.228904883108 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772012066243 0.108899403657 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.213259423899 0.367819155151 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0567204550656 0.0812612215331 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203907406857 0.316326947829 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101811138347 0.0921553760075 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.14146341463 613% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.