The figure gives information about smoking habits of the UK population by age.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
Write an essay based on this task.
The bar chart compares the data about the patterns of smoking habits of the UK residents and the comparisons have been done by age group. Overall, the majority of people who have never smoked belong to the age group of 16-24 and the least number of people from the age group of 65-74 are people those have never smoked.
As can be seen from the pie chart, almost two-thirds of young people below 24 years of age have never smoked in their life. However, as people grow, the numbers of people who have never smoked start getting reduced. Therefore, in the age category of 65-74 years, the number of people who have never smoked is the least.
Another glaring feature the pie chart presents is that there are more numbers of people who start quitting smoking as they grow older especially after they attain the age group of 45-54. Therefore, the ex-smokers, the people who have stopped smoking, keep on rising significantly in each age group after they are older than 54. For example, when people are in the age bracket of 45-54, there are only 10% ex-smokers. The figures get more than doubled (almost 25%) when people are within the age group of 55-64. This trend continues and the maximum number of people who have given up smoking are older than 65. In this group of 65-74, almost 40% people can be seen as those who used to smoke earlier but do not smoke any more.
The number of heavy smoker has risen in each age category and has reached the high of almost 15% when people are in the age bracket of 45-54 but thereafter, it has fallen gradually. The similar trend can be observed even in case of light smokers after they reach the age of 45 and thereafter.
the least number of people from the age group of 65-74 are people those have never smoked.
the least number of people from the age group of 65-74 are people who have never smoked.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23768115942 0.268076937826 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.171014492754 0.116061578633 147% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0434782608696 0.0759168565197 57% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0579710144928 0.0366838410393 158% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0173913043478 0.0131127313244 133% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142028985507 0.155750635184 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0608695652174 0.0379272487307 160% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.07662324825 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00579710144928 0.0210936926555 27% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00289855072464 0.00175180941692 165% => OK
Determiners: 0.101449275362 0.0948980150116 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00869565217391 0.00437022459523 199% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0289855072464 0.00967000014798 300% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1670.0 1161.00487805 144% => OK
No of words: 313.0 196.9 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33546325879 5.90752243213 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.73763899035 113% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.26517571885 0.337110787985 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.14696485623 0.247514529752 59% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0798722044728 0.171178102325 47% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0319488817891 0.112407865282 28% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.07662324825 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460063897764 0.546246751206 84% => OK
Word variations: 45.3411297294 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 8.93414634146 146% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0769230769 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3693822736 42.9750493124 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.461538462 135.714022679 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.689975730869 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 38.7734086999 47.7609492067 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.78823529412 2.94281807926 61% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312983169649 0.418131533498 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.221617737342 0.181151798455 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0733230564223 0.0850326197045 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.68449822794 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13774729908 0.157042692854 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174749721623 0.228904883108 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980831621462 0.108899403657 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.516400657211 0.367819155151 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0779575692338 0.0812612215331 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251105602117 0.316326947829 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767105985343 0.0921553760075 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 7.1512195122 182% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9