The graph below gives information about U.S government spending on research between 1980 and 2008.

Essay topics:

The graph below gives information about U.S government spending on research between 1980 and 2008.

Overall, it can be seen that, most significant source of research is health and higher amount of tallest had been contributed on health related to research by the u.s. government.In contrast other and general science had a comparatively amounts on research.

Firstly, from 1982 1984 amount on health research dropped slightly, then after it had experience at 23 billion dollar in 2004. Research on energy followed concave slope, Initially energy had second lowest amount in research among all other research and roughly at $5 billions dollars and it had remained 10 million dollar in 1996 then after it had decreased at same position just like as their beginning position(5%) in 2009.

Secondly, spending amount on others research had starting at near a tenth in 1980, then it slumped minimally to 25 billion dollar in 1968, but after this there was slight rose before dropping at 4 millions in 2008. Besides this, from 1982 to 1996 there was slow boost up in amount of General Science research followed by 3 million dollar decrease in 2008.

The US authority had spent less amount on space research, which was 6 million dollar in 1980 then after it followed stabilized try until 2008.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02525252525 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54999994999 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1924190747 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.833333333 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130676944281 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831250911775 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300920105568 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974490391676 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279493522928 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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