he two pie charts below show the pollution entering a particular part of ocean in 1997 and 2007.
A glance at the two pie chart provided reveals the proportion of contaminants discharging into specific ocean area in 1997 and 2007.
Overall, it is clear that the rate of pollutants inpouring into ocean changed substantially in two years.
It is noticeable that 15% of waste stemmed from oil in 1997, increasing by 37% to make up over a half of total pollutants in 2017. Likewise, the discharge of air pollution witnessed a considerable rise from 3% in 1997 to 15% in 2017.
In stark contrast, trash accounted for the highest contamination in ocean, at 42% in 1997. After a decade, the proportion of trash contaminant releasing into specific ocean area plummeted by 27% in 2007. Similarly, there was a modest decline tendency of Agriculture runoff and Sewage from 25% and 15% in 1997 to 10% and 8% in 2007 respectively.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, similarly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90070921986 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01584434893 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.0581239249 43.030603864 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258649668434 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118989760263 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636449741061 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162138947824 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618597554004 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.