line charts show the size of global population, pie charts show the global population by region

Essay topics:

line charts show the size of global population, pie charts show the global population by region

These graphs give information about the growth of global population from 1400 to 2000 and its distribution over different areas at the beginning of the 20th century and 21st century.

Overall, it is clear that there was an increasing in the number of people in the world and Asia is the region that has the most population. However, most of population growth occurred in Africa and Latin America.

As can be seen from the line chart, the world population rose gradually by about 1 billion people between 1400 and 1700 and then decreasing slowly to 1 billion people in 1800, before surging to 6 billion people by 2000.

The pie charts show that in 1900 and in 2000, both Asia and Europe witnessed a considerably fell in their percentage of population, the former from 6% to 10% and the latter form from 60% to 54%. By contrast, the population of Latin America and Africa rose dramatically by 5% and 9.5% respectively. Whereas, North America showed no changes, remaining constant at 5% of the world population. The percentage in other continents increased from 3.5% to 6%.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84864864865 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72373438486 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589189189189 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1048126278 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232904995852 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790606047153 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507503552498 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111280156277 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473672195031 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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