Measures for controlling the crime rate
In several countries in the world such as Japan or Sweden, the crime rate is much lower than other nations. How do they control the percentage? This essay will present several methods for the governments to decrease the immorality.
The first solution is that the governments should raise their citizens’ awareness of law. Through ethical lessons, legal and illegal activities in behavior should be given for students in order to help them avoid criminal situations. In addition, measures of punishment for criminals should be shown publicly in the media to warn the citizen, which make them be so frightened that they must give up illegal actions.
Along with raising awareness of citizens in law, the governments should reduce the unemployment rate by making a big number of job opportunities. If people are busy with working, they will have no time to communicate with gangsters and join in criminal activities. Hence, there is a significant decrease in number of outlaws when employment is supplied adequately.
Finally, the authorities should organize more and more charity programs in order to raise citizens’ kindness which makes them avoid illegal behavior. For example, the programs, in which people will help poor children from remote areas, make participants feel really lucky when living in better family circumstances which they need to regard and reserve them.
In brief, to control the crime rate effectively, the governments should promote knowledge of citizens in law, create more job and organize more charity programs. Meanwhile, parents should more time on taking care of their children to make them become good citizens.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, really, so, while, for example, in addition, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35249042146 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83129578386 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.77943642 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181988980251 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604766255836 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599875155166 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101161337157 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698925429169 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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