The pie chart shows the percentage of seals made in different genres by a bookstore in 2017

Essay topics:

The pie chart shows the percentage of seals made in different genres by a bookstore in 2017.

The circular chart depicts the information of construction of a business in a bookstore by a variety of breeds in 2017. The data is calibrated in percentage.

Overall, book regrades to horror was accounted for the highest amount of proportion than that of all kind of books. However, others, travel, poetry-related stories had been sealed in the chiefest amount, which probably consisted lower percentage as compared to all genres of books.

To begin with, a minor difference has been observed in seals of travels and biography books, which was 2%, whereas 7 % of health-related books had been bought in 2017. The percentage of romance-related books had comprised for 25% which was 5% less than that of horror books. Even 30% of horror books were sold in higher amounts in accordance with all books.

Secondly, others and poetry books had experienced almost the same quantity of seals which was 5% in total. Nevertheless, they were extremely lower than the proportion of drama books which was 15%. As far as seals of religion books were concerned, 10% that types of books were sold in 2017.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, whereas, kind of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01639344262 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8690711037 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3890093297 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142993355649 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592222915127 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602135904108 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971764559603 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332865848796 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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