The process shows how carbon made in the environment

Essay topics:

The process shows how carbon made in the environment.

The process represents how carbon made through various stages in the nature.

Overall, there are seven stages for making the carbon, the process embark with the aid of sun ra and carbon face either good or bad experience until the end.

Firstly, trees are collected for evaluating some useful emissions and it then those emission delivered in factory for blending some substance. Although it is not good for the environments, it must be required for making unclear carbon

At the extent, half of the process is completed, this unclear carbon faded under the surface in form of bricks and even this unclear carbon could abled for involve in rain, so that clear carbon is made by rain and cycle begins again.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this emission' or 'those emissions'?
Suggestion: this emission; those emissions
...ating some useful emissions and it then those emission delivered in factory for blending some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, then, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 595.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9173553719 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32840881361 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652892561983 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.0332601815 43.030603864 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.75 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262728842008 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179652009563 0.103423049105 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135506335493 0.0843802449381 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190981935541 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125028279869 0.0819641961636 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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