The salary is the most important consideration when one choose a job
Some people assert that a high-salary job will be chosen certainly because it makes their income improve which affects significantly their quality of lives; however, others believe that money is not the most important criteria when they find a job. From my point of view, I disagree with the opinion that the salary is considered as the major factor of choosing an employment for following several reasons.
The first reason is that employees can suffer considerable pressure from getting a high payment. If workers receive a high salary, they have to do tasks in their best. Hence, they must spend much time and energy on work that can make them be stressful. As a result, they can get some diseases such as stomach- ache or sleeplessness.
Along with getting pressure, high-salary- paid labors can be in unsafe working environment. For example, miners usually earn much; however, their job is quite dangerous since they have to work in toxic environment where they may lose their life any time. In addition, they sometimes have a strict competition between their colleagues that makes them become be fed up with their work.
Lastly, people who have high- income job are usually so busy that they have no time for not only themselves but also their family. They always must travel on long business trips, so they cannot enjoy their hobbies or take care of their children. Even they must work on holiday instead of relaxing totally.
In conclusion, the salary is not the most important factor in choosing a job. Many factors are much more meaningful such as comfort, safety and having free time for the family. People should consider carefully on choosing a job because it can make them succeed or fail and happy or bored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...because it can make them succeed or fail and happy or bored.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 5.60731707317 642% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 293.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90102389078 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48257330556 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 106.607317073 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 283.868780488 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2798252181 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176998882539 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744091237055 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129928935937 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119739618588 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111166179084 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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