A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .....................,
Dear Tina,
I am writing in order to show my gratitude that you have agreed to look after my house and pet while I will be on a holiday. I will share some cardinal information regarding the task as well so that you face minimal trouble.
I will be residing in Dusai Hotel in Sylhet, Room- 306 and you can reach me on my WhatsApp anytime. I will share the phone number as soon as I reach the destination country. All necessary stuff and cat food for my pet will be available in the dining room's white-colored left corner side drawer. My pet is well-behaved and only requires meal on time which is at 10 am and another at 5 pm. Apart from taking care of the pet, you need to water my plants daily in the evening. Besides, you need to make sure to wash the utensils after you use them and keep the waste bag outside the door every morning before 8 AM so that local water collectors can take it. This task is only to prevent bad odors from making your stay unpleasant.
Please feel free to reach out to me for any queries. Thanks for your time.
Yours Sincerely,
Tabassum
Comments
Dear John, Many thanks for…
Dear John,
Many thanks for agreeing to my request this morning. I am glad to have a friend like you and appreciate your help. As discussed over a call, I am sending you some written notes, which could come handy just in case.
Firstly, if any emergency, you may call the reception of my Hotel at Paris. Usually, I book the same hotel for my business trip and they are very prompt to inform their customers. It will not be a problem reaching out to me.
It is helpful to know that my Cat likes drinking milk with biscuits but does not eat rice. Its food items are under the table in the kitchen just next to the wooden dining table. I have stocked them sufficiently and should be enough for two weeks.
Finally, I have a flower pot on the balcony. I would appreciate if you could water it at least once in a week.
That’s all and really appreciate your sweet gestures. Now, I can relax in my holdays.
See you soon & best wishes!
Sam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Tina, I am writing in order to show my gratitu...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l so that you face minimal trouble. I will be residing in Dusai Hotel in Sylh...
^
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou can reach me on my WhatsApp anytime. I will share the phone number as soon as ...
^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anks for your time. Yours Sincerely, Tabassum
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, regarding, so, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30392156863 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31206321145 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642156862745 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1563694282 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244075153498 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947669524191 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068732388524 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163923087657 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138239734258 0.0580467560999 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.