A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country.You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her.
Write a letter to this friend.In your letter
Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
Explain how to apply for the job
Dear Nasrin,
How are you? Hope you have a good day. Your letter arrived two days ago.I read your letter precisely. And I have a suggestion for you.
A few days ago I saw an ad in a local newspaper that a company needed an interpreter.You should attend meetings and translate their conversations with English-speaking companies.You should also respond to emails and letters from other companies.
I think this is very convenient for you. Because you have lived in London for a few years and you are fluent in English.And on the other hand you have strong social relationships and you can take responsibility for it well.
According to the description given in the ad, you should email your qualifications and career records to the company address.
Hope to hear from you soon.
All the best!
Sudabeh
I forgot to write the company email address. The address is www.dolphin .com
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sations with English-speaking companies.You should also respond to emails and lette...
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...few years and you are fluent in English.And on the other hand you have strong socia...
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Suggestion: .
...mail address. The address is www.dolphin .com
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12666666667 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03687705089 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.4729008348 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9090909091 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6363636364 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362114950041 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153681679849 0.0766984524023 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867150434786 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180251565464 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113101002492 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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