George’s Primary school is looking for a young, energetic and experienced schoolteacher to join us in September. Must be a good organizer and keen on sports. Please apply in writing to Mrs. Hunter. Give details of qualifications, skills, and previous experiences. Say why you think you are suitable for the job.
Dear Mrs. Hunter,
I am writing this letter to apply for the schoolteacher that has been recently advertised on Weekly Z magazine.
I am 27 years old. I graduated from National University in 2017. My major is gymnastic education and athlete training with a first-class degree.
I have been working as a volunteer for the World Health Organization since 2018. This job provides me a lot of experience in communication and organizing campaigns. As a member of this group, I work with children in remote areas, take care of them in boarding schools. During the time, I have learned not only how to do professionally but also to be punctual. Furthermore, when I was at university, I had a chance to be a team leader of Running Clubs. The clubs had more than 50 official members and hundreds of non-official participants. I had a good experiment on management and teamwork.
As I have a desire of working for an education field and I love children as well as my previous experience, I would be suitable for this position. If I have an opportunity to company with your organization, I would devote my knowledge to your development.
I will be available to take part in an interview from 9th June to the end of August. Please contact my mobile phone number 567567 at any time suits you.
I looking forwards to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...e number 567567 at any time suits you. I looking forwards to your reply. Yours ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73076923077 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08820640084 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636752136752 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4471543708 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1875 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137480799519 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394517211281 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042594421592 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597568704794 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380278300916 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...e number 567567 at any time suits you. I looking forwards to your reply. Yours ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73076923077 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08820640084 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636752136752 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4471543708 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1875 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137480799519 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394517211281 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042594421592 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597568704794 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380278300916 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.