Write a letter to government about lack of sport facilities in your hometown for people on your age.
In your letter, you should tell:
• what facilities you want
• why you want them
• what suggestions you can give
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention on the sport facilities which is lacking in our city.
Recently I have shifted to this wonderful city with my family, but to surprise I came to know that there is not big stadium available in the city, which provide the variety of sporting facilities under single roof. I think development of stadium is vital for the proper development of the people living here.
I am national level hockey player and working in public sector under sports quota and most of the time I keeps on travelling. But when I will be at home it will be difficult for me to practice. So if a stadium is opened , me along with other youngsters can ripe the benefit and may make the country pride at international level.
There is a lot of vacant space available in the outskirt of the city which can be utilized for the construction of stadium can I am sure it will change the life of many people and they gain the name at national and international live and make the city famous. Apart from this, because of these people can also stay fit and healthy.
Hope you will consider my request.
Yours faithfully,
Maninder Vadhrah
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ayer and working in public sector under sports quota and most of the time I keeps on t...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'keep'
Suggestion: keep
...der sports quota and most of the time I keeps on travelling. But when I will be at ho...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e to practice. So if a stadium is opened , me along with other youngsters can ripe...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62380952381 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52795515489 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7727740598 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166336862786 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673454157633 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600219710361 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100478445228 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730298280619 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.