Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged.
In your letter, you should:
• tell him your name and where you are living
• describe the problem
• suggest what you want him to do for it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to draw you attention on the pathetic condition of street in front of my resident
I am resident of phase 1 Mohali, Punjab, India. My name is Maninder Kaur Vadhrah. It is the very posh and good locality of our beautiful city. I purchased this house only because of the surrounding and infrastructure of the area.
Actually the trouble started last year when the construction of apartments started in back side of the residential area. Builder si constructing the huge residential apartments around 200 in that area. All the heavy vehicle, which are carrying the construction material are passing through our lane, because of the traffic congestion in the highway. Due to this the road is in extremely pathetic situation and urgently require the re construction
Earlier builder promised that he will get the road repaired after the completion of his project, but six months passed and nothing has been done so far. I request you to kindly get the road build again as it is causing huge inconvenience to the local residents or file the complaint against the builder.
Hope to get the solution soon.
Yours faithfully,
Maninder kaur Vadhrah
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Yours faithfully, Maninder kaur Vadhrah
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82232868934 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631313131313 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9735734722 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127694069911 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421782301009 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485860286728 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0471437610524 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565972168343 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.