You are interesting in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university.
Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter:
explain which course you are interested in
tell what you what to know about the university
explain why you would receive the scholarship
Dear Sir/Madame,
I have read about the scholarship program in Times Newspaper, and I would like to apply for the scholarship under privileged children category for master of business administration program. Here I am referring to one year course which is specifically mentioned on your website.
Though I have read all the information, still I have few queries. I would like to know is this course equivalent to Canadian masters degree. I know, that your university is recognized by UGC, but I want to know about UGC certification for this particular course. I am asking this because universities which offer one year MBA is not recognized by regulating bodies according to some people.
I am applying for this scholarship because my father's income is less and it is impossible for me to pay the regular fees. I have been a university topper in my graduation exams and I am a very hardworking and self motivated student. According to me I deserve this scholarship and if given a chance I will never let you down.
Your sincerely,
Rina
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 264, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rtification for this particular course. I am asking this because universities whi...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing bodies according to some people. I am applying for this scholarship becaus...
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Line 8, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ossible for me to pay the regular fees. I have been a university topper in my gra...
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Line 8, column 234, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...hardworking and self motivated student. According to me I deserve this scholarship and if given...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94350282486 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08716612069 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8149548756 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182416351177 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650750717395 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497244744527 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12102958671 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314666509205 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.