You have been working in an international company in abroad. Now you are going back to home country without informing your office friends. Write an apology letter to these friends.
In the letter, you should:
• apologies to your friends
• explain why you are leaving,
• tell them what you’ll miss about them
Dear John,
I am writing to you to let you know that I am in India from last 4 days. I understand your situation in office as I have left without informing my decision to coming back to my home. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience faced by you since my absence.
This happened all of a sudden after I got a call from my elder brother that my father was hospitalized. My father suffered from heart attack on Monday evening and my family immediately admitted him in the nearby hospital. After getting this sad news, I immediately booked my flight and came back to India. Even, I informed my manager about my situation after landing in New Delhi airport.
I can vibe the situation in office, as we were about close a deal that we were chasing from last 2 years. However, I believe that you are capable enough to clear all last-minute obligations for this deal. Moreover, I am available on WhatsApp for any support, but answering a phone call will be limited. Had you been on my shoe, you would have taken the same decision.
Once again my sincere apology to you and see you soon.
Regards,
Bibhu Kalita
Comments
Dear John,
Dear John,
I am writing this letter to let you know that i am in India as i have to come here as my brother met with a serious accident.
I have to left Canada urgently. So i apologize for inconvenience , i know i should have inform you however at that point i did not thought and booked ticket . i have not informed the manager but after landing i informed him. I know you will handle all work in my absence , if you need any help for understanding any pending work please let me know i will be available on watsapp . I know you will understand my situation as if you would had been done same thing if you have to gone through same situation.
Please take care of yourself and please check my room , i have handover the keys to society in charge.
Yours faithfully
Neha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I am writing to you to let you know that...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55940594059 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58918463437 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628712871287 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0091107659 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.8461538462 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196526428261 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829200222331 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918424269335 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168840568101 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107344632451 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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