You read an article in a magazine recently which might be useful for you and your friend’s job. Write a letter to your friend and describe an article and its content to your friend. Explain why it is good for you. Why would it be helpful for your friend?
Hi Nirav,
Happy New Year to you and your family. Hope you all enjoyed the festivities at fullest. I am writing this letter to inform you about the recent article I read and I feel it can help both of us to explore the new market opportunities.
The article was in Down to Earth Magazine about the Internet-based continues soil Monitoring in the field of Karnataka. The article says that it requires both the hardware as well as software integration. The hardware can be inserted in the field for the monitoring purpose where the software can help to share the data over the cloud. I feel that my sensor solution can be combined with your cloud-based system and can develop a whole new solution for them. It is a long-term association with them and can make a good amount of money out of this project.
Send your review on this project. I firmly believe that we can make to this goal as per our ability. I will be waiting for your revert.
Thank you, Shivan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Nirav, Happy New Year to you and your family. H...
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Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...says that it requires both the hardware as well as software integration. The hardware can ...
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Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rdware as well as software integration. The hardware can be inserted in the field f...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53142857143 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58051727135 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5076967428 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0833333333 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250899369754 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968594679964 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682821560878 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172394251399 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373089968609 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.