You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to a college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Jack,
Hi. How are you? I have already received your letter told me that you are wondering about continuing to a college or trying to get a job. I am writing to give you some advice.
When I was a fresh graduate, I faced up with this matter. To be honest, I advise you not to get into a college as you have just finished a course in accounting. Unless you were very interested in studying, you will keep trying to do this. But you are not very keen on becoming an economics professor, consequently, you might waste your time learning without an alternative aim.
In my point of view, you should choose to work indeed. To be immersed in the working environment is a really good way to improve knowledge and develop interaction skills. Especially, your major is suitable for every company in many fields. You can get potential offers if you are both determined and ambitious. I recommend that you will be able in the working environment of the bank so that you can earn experience as well as promote your career.
That is my opinion. I hope you will always be happy about making the decision. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51674641148 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61748290848 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641148325359 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6797728698 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.9333333333 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27434658859 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868447759732 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813175248179 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182793185429 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871687211959 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.