You recently saw an advertisement for a business conference that can be helpful for your work. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to attend the conference. In your letter say, what is the conference about? How did you know about the conference? Explain to him/her why it is important that you attend this conference. Inform him/her about the schedule and venue of the conference.
Dear Mr. Jonson,
I am writing this letter to take your permission to attend the business conference about which I recently got information. The conference is a Massive Earth Summit at New Delhi next month on 14th at DLF Cyber Hub.
I saw the advertisement for this conference on the LinkedIn platform and also heard some news from our client. As per my analysis, this conference can be very fruitful. The event is all about the new wireless technology for monitoring in three major areas that is air, water, and soil. Our company is already working in this area with the very same technology and we are just waiting to get certified by the authorized body which allow us to penetrate deep in the market. This event has many well-known personalities as a speaker. By attending this conference we can generate a lot many leads and come in contact with big heads of a market.
I hope you also find this conference interesting and allow me to visit it. Also, the event is on fourth Saturday which is a non-working day in our company so it will be a very good chance to utilize the day. Hope to get your answer positive.
Your faithfully, Rahul
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58536585366 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68038016606 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619512195122 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4529671443 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267217484058 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942039155141 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755996704288 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158127429566 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490201340601 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.