You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for the celebration
say what was good about the food and the service
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own addresses.
Begin your letters as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude and appreciation of the excellent service in your restaurant which we had visited in the evening of 25 January. It was my birthday and I had invited many friends and relatives for a cocktail dinner. Everyone who was there liked your prompt service, the range of food and drinks, and taste of everything you served.
First of all, we were pleased with the ambience of the restaurant and the sitting arrangement you had made for us. The low and muted background music was very pleasing, and at the same time, it allowed us to have a conversation without requiring to speak louder. Your staff were also professional and were quick to take the orders.
We really appreciated how you managed to bring the right food to the right person. As some of the guests were vegetarian, I was worried that there could be a mix-up as the orders were really too many.
Finally, your complimentary non-alcoholic drinks were very sweet and we finished our dinner with great feelings.
I wish you all the best and success in your business.
Warm regards,
ABC
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... us. The low and muted background music was very pleasing, and at the same time, it allowed us to...
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Line 6, column 247, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'speaking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: speaking
...o have a conversation without requiring to speak louder. Your staff were also profession...
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Line 8, column 87, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... the right food to the right person. As some of the guests were vegetarian, I was worried t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, really, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8112244898 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64005347307 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3535756103 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7272727273 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309404329894 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995913451066 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593636424667 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15570567563 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037936737279 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.