Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to work at a job you enjoy than make a lot of money. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.
In modern life, I agree that money is very important for everyone because money can cover expenses in their life such as rent houses, telephones, the internet or essential good and services so that many people struggle to earn more money. Most people work in places where they can earn more money although they don’t like it. However, I prefer to work for a job which I enjoy.
First of all, people will feel happier when they work at a job which they enjoy. They are happy to go to work because they love a job. For example, when employees have to work extra time, they are willing to work and happy because employees don’t feel stressed or unpleasant jobs. Since most people spend a large percentage of their lives at their jobs, it is important to have a job that brings happiness.
Secondly, when people enjoy their jobs, they have the motivation to overcome challenges. When people who work a job in which they passion face troubles, they will find a solution to resolve it even though the matter is difficult. On the one hand, people who work for money, are very easy to given up when they face a problem. Therefore, working for a job which they enjoy helps them motivating to overcome troubles and become more mature.
Finally, working at a job they enjoy helping them achieve their goal. When they work for passion help them have responsibility for work that they have been assigned and they always complete a deadline on time. Moreover, they will usually update new knowledge and skills through their work so it is easy to achieve their goal brings more profit for the company.
Inconclusion, working for money helps them cover the cost of their life but working to enjoy help them feel happier, create a motivation to pass the problem, and achieve success in the future. Therefore people should work in which they enjoy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to motivate' or 'motivate'.
Suggestion: to motivate; motivate
...g for a job which they enjoy helps them motivating to overcome troubles and become more ma...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...lem, and achieve success in the future. Therefore people should work in which they enjoy....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69969040248 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30731383872 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461300309598 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3577753972 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140056729709 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731240570385 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313940204275 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103878882573 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238228127258 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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