The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which the goods are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modernization era, people’s demand for shopping is increasing significantly. Some people contend the idea that the high sales of products result in the advertisement process but not the needs of consumers. However, I do believe that both two factors lead to the rising sales of goods.
On the one hand, the high sales of popular products result in people’s needs for their real lives. Firstly, citizens in some industrialized nations and also developing countries have more diverse and complex demands than previous decades; therefore, they tend to buy more consumer goods for themselves and their families as well. Moreover, we are living in a globalization culture; thus, people’s appetite to use international best seller products from home furniture and groceries to gardening equipment also generally increases. Additionally, the more their social statuses are higher, the more items they want to match their positions. For example, the need to buy hundreds of shoes of an international singer is highly acceptable since she needs suitable pairs of shoes for different types of clothes and accessories. As a result, the sales of popular consumer products are believed to continuously increased.
On the other hand, advertising plays an important role in the development of manufacturers. The first interesting fact is that products, especially cosmetics, baby products, clothes and the like, with advertising focusing on target impressionable customers like women, students and mothers are usually sought out. Moreover, the adverts also appear frequently on the Internet, televisions, leaflets, buses, and banners, which reinforces the appetite of having those products in consumers’ minds. Another effect of advertisement is that the use of idols, especially female models, attracts numerous customers. For example, car companies usually advert their products along with the appearance of beautiful and gorgeous women.
In conclusion, the increase in sales of popular goods is affected greatly by both people’s needs and the strength of advertising. Customers in the twenty-first century should spend money wiser in order to economize and gain benefits from the products.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69277108434 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16392974706 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8530961148 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.125 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177167040738 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604519791374 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604478621702 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107318137992 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293360851757 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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