Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our homes,leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of IT overweigh the disadvantage.
The idea of whether Information Technology has taken place in human lives is a matter of debate.The substantial influence of information Technology has sparked the controversy over the potential impact on the society in recent years.In my opinion, IT is affecting lives at every pace; however this proposition requires serious consideration before a plausive verdict can be reached.
There are myriad reasons in the favor of IT because it makes human life easier and comfortable.The most conspicuous is people can work anywhere and also information technology is a major factor for globalisation and multinational business.It also affected amature activities such as there are so many gadgets to play games and also one of the most interesting example is virtual reality which is very enjoyable such as if you want to experience a weather of Canada while sitting in Australia you can do that through virtual reality.Nowadays Homes are also can controlled by Mobile phone such as monitor through cameras, access the electricity and so on.
However, it also has some drawbacks, Such as it make lifestyle very lazy. For example,Few years ago people usually love to go outing for dinner and do other activities but today they just sit on cough order food and play games.Information technology also a reason for unemployment because now computer and robots can do the work which human supposes to do.
Overall, It can be concluded that benefits og the information technology are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21399176955 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.105428433 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 211.04255495 49.4020404114 427% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 253.4 106.682146367 238% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6 20.7667163134 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164296529362 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843998536985 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459548179704 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102030576186 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152709638072 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.4 13.0946893788 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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