Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The idea of whether information technology has taken place in human lives is a matter of debate. The substantial influence of information technology has sparked the controversy over the potential impact on the society in recent years. In my opinion, IT is affecting lives at every pace; however this proposition requires serious consideration before a plausible verdict can be reached.
There are myriad reasons in the favor of IT because it makes human life easier and comfortable. The most conspicuous are people can work anywhere and also information technology is a major factor for globalization and multinational business. It also affected leisure activities such as there are so many gadgets to play games and also one of the most interesting example is virtual reality which is very enjoyable such as if you want to experience a weather of Canada while sitting in Australia you can do that through virtual reality. Nowadays Homes are also can controlled by Mobile phone such as monitor through cameras; access the electricity and so on.
However, it also has some drawbacks, Such as it make lifestyle very lazy. For example, few years ago people usually love to go outing for dinner and do other activities but nowadays they just sit on cough order food and play games. Information technology also a reason for unemployment because now computer and robots can do the work which human supposes to do.
Overall, it can be conclude that benefits of the information technology are indeed too dire to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'control' or 'be controlled'?
Suggestion: control; be controlled
...al reality. Nowadays Homes are also can controlled by Mobile phone such as monitor through...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.092 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8612416885 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6348781739 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230302699387 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913302697976 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734054597459 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145380584203 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024587348639 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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