Many offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening and what solutions are of those?
Crimes, without doubt, increasing day by day in this era of inflation. Presently, in many cases it is seen, after completing the primary penalty culprits execute more evil activities. Here, I, would like to account for motive as well as solutions of this worrying concern.
There are several reasons why offenders do more crime. First and foremost, it is extremely a hard nut to crack for criminals to find an employment after coming out of prison. To illustrate, when culprits complete their punishment they are seeking for a job to earn bread and butter, inspite of giving job people feel scared from them as they have a criminal record. Consequently, their would no choice left behind for them instead of indulging in illegal activities again for their survival. Besides this, lack of fear is also other main cause. To demonstrate, after first punishment offenders have no fear, guilty and embarrassment as they are not getting a strict punishment. So, they execute crime time and again.
Now, major judicious measures need to be taken to address this alarming problem. The first and best possible way is to provide free education and counseling to criminals behind the bar. To justify, councler could tell them about the bad effects of crime on social life of people. What is more, authorities have to give a strict punishment of the crime which they had committed. So, offenders would think many time before committing any illegal activity. On the top of it, government should provide employment opportunities to culprits in community work at a low cost as this will be extremely lucrative for both offenders and government.
In conclusion, after having all points into my knowledge, I, would like to reiterate that supreme power of a nation should provide all the possible solutions which are mentioned above. If authorities want to give a happy and joyful life to the other people of their country.
Comments
Sir how can I reach to 7.5
Sir how can I reach to 7.5 band
There are a lot of transition
There are a lot of transition words/phrases. Using few of them is enough. Then you may get 7.5.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...ad committed. So, offenders would think many time before committing any illegal activity....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, in many cases, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02201257862 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71781994098 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6689637507 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252065413633 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741968010458 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623728417357 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134889129549 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525917283345 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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