Many people believe that social networking sites have had had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Social networking platforms on internet such as Facebook, are thought to have detrimental impacts on strata as well as society. I completely agree with this notion and the drawbacks of such type of internet sites will be discussed in below mentioned paragraphs.
In the present era of technological developments, myriad innovations can be witnessed and internet is one of them, of course. A plethora of social networking websites, for instance twitter, Facebook are utilized by people out and out in order to make new friends and find the existing one; could be a herculean task to locate, otherwise. Moreover, such websites are a significance source of news and entertainment. Majority of students find it a commendable source of education in the form of online classes as well as study material.
On the contrary, people using such online websites are often betrayed by the fake identities of other users. For instance, anti-social masses create unreal accounts and attract innocent people into their trap; becomes a herculean task to get out of that, afterwards. Apart from this, huge amount of illicit and objectionable content is uploaded by these websites which might not be fruitful for the society. For example, videos and clips of terrorists training classes can be witnessed on internet, thereby pushing youth into such delinquent acts.
In conclusion, although these networking platforms were launched with an intention of socializing and interacting with people in every nook and corner of the earth, copious harmful effects including anti-social elements, drugs and many more, are the outcomes affecting community and people, undoubtedly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: out-and-out
...witter, Facebook are utilized by people out and out in order to make new friends and find t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38996138996 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96970185584 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617760617761 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0210847968 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.909090909 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138908133651 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485716653194 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512673868533 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883784353775 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041550188458 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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