Many people were involved in sports as children, but don't do any physical exercise as adults. What are the reasons adults avoid physical exercise.

Essay topics:

Many people were involved in sports as children, but don't do any physical exercise as adults. What are the reasons adults avoid physical exercise.

Sports, without doubt, play constructive and massive role in the development of an individual. Presently, number of humans were enrolled in games as offsprings. However, they always try to avoid physical training as youngsters. Here, I, would like to account for the reasons why adults escape from physical exercises.

There are several reasons behind this occurrence. First and foremost reason is that huge proportion of adults are unwilling to execute physical exercise. To be specific, recent survey by SAI(sports authority of India) concluded that nearly 70% athletes are not eager to participate in physical exercise because they think it would put pressure on muscles and also waste energy. Besides this, another important reason is that adults are glued towards sport rather than exercise. To justify, maximum youngsters think, main motive is to be become veteran in sports inspite of physical training, they consider it as a wastage of time.

What is more, there might be another possibility that younger ones are unaware of proper training due to lack of guidance. To demonstrate, it is a fact that we cannot open a lock without keys as same in the case of physical exercise, unless we are guided properly we cannot do it. In addition to it, physical training seems to be like a hard nut to crack for some youngsters because they need proper stamina, flexibility, potential and many more things to execute it. Thence, adults find it hard and they always try to avert their eyes from this training.

In conclusion, after having all points into my knowledge, I, would like to reiterate that physical activities are must and extremely lucrative to live a happy and joyful life.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, however, if, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08273381295 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66509866474 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5702449426 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.928571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259391202271 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837998995895 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559028685599 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138361101714 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631532049792 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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