MOST PEOPLE WOULD PREFER TO WORK FOR THEMSELVES RATHER THAN SOMEONE ELSE. DO YOU AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?. USE SPECIFIC REASONS AND DETAILS TO EXPLAIN YOUR OPINION.
Nowadays, there are lots of start-ups in the market. I believe that almost all people would prefer to work for themselves rather than employees at the company. Being self-employed or running a business give people independence, flexibility with their schedule, and reward for their effort, that is the reason why people want to work for themselves.
First of all, most people prefer to work for themselves because of their independence they could. Employees have to follow their boss’s instructions. Sometimes they have conflicts with their boss but they don’t argue because they are afraid they will be fired. However, self-employed people who run businesses have the freedom to make their own decisions. Therefore, people who work for themselves extremely liberating.
Secondly, being self-employed have the flexibility to manage their schedule. Employees at the company have to work full-time so it is hard to go to the supermarket or take care of their baby but people who work for themselves can fit these things into their schedule.
Finally, the most important thing is that people who work for themselves can reward their effort. Employees at the company don’t have the motivation to work because their efforts are not recognized and reward. But the situation is different for self-employed people. The harder they work, the more money they earn so they have any motivation to work. it helps them to increase their creativity and develop their knowledges and skills. Unlike normal employees, they are directly rewarded for their effort. Therefore, most people would rather work for themselves.
In sum, most people would prefer to work for themselves rather than employees at the company. Business owners have to independence, more flexibility, and receive greater rewards for their work than normal employees do.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 351, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35051546392 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78737586711 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46735395189 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0827936078 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9473684211 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237333534933 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107193517566 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10836554072 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183976073238 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786746945635 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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