Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries.
Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, jobs vacation needs people who has many experience than graduate from the university. However, both of them are important for the company in many states.
For knowledge, the company would have known about the strategic issue and the prediction to face the economic changes, because without the right plan, sometimes people would be trapped in the complex situation. Putting more simply, science would be a tremendous help for company to resolve a problem. For example, Facebook, one of the social media platform, when it was hijacked by hacker, the problem had been solved by the knowledge of scientist.
However, experience is vital for the growth of organization. Due to, experience will be the best teacher, when knowledge face the deadlock solution. It could be happened, because sometimes science would be loss with human intervention. For example, in the Jakarta district court, the lawyer often used a black strategy to challenge the rights side, and it could provide the different result than people learn in the school of law, so the knowledge would be important to prevent those case happen in the other condition.
In conclusion, experience and knowledge are important in the workplaces in many nations. Knowledge would be the guidance to the right path, while experience would be the best way, if the knowledge against the rock, it means that the company should have mix both of them to create the best quality and quantity. Where possible, the company should have produce job vacancies with two requirements for their future workers, have knowledge and experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
...ars, jobs vacation needs people who has many experience than graduate from the university. Howe...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'mixed', 'mixt'.
Suggestion: mixed; mixt
..., it means that the company should have mix both of them to create the best quality...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20077220077 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66423814722 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552123552124 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9022990938 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127277674492 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628125678619 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621329444761 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882741311765 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389024133035 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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