Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
• In our life, market nowadays is supplied by diverse types of products with different brands, models, qualities. Most of people are willing to buy several things of reputable company such as clothes, cars and other items rather than obscure one. It can be explain that their goods have a high quality and can present owner’s level with others people. In my opinion, this behavior affects human development in both positive and negative way
• As we all know, famous brands are commonly linked with high-class values. Their reputation was built up from the trust of customers toward highest standards about durability, design, convenience and harmlessness to health and environment. Obviously, the household appliances from the well-known groups as Sanyo, Toshiba, Panasonic or LG has maintained its position as the first choice owning to its transcendent features such as being smart and green, energy saving, elegant design and health protection. Moreover, most of people who belong in the upper strata of society desire to impress their own class by using luxury or limited clothes, cars or items from, for example, Channel, Hermes and Gucci for fashion as well as Roll-Royce, Bentley and Porsche for vehicle.
• In fact, this lifestyle motivates the average people to work hard to become wealthier so as to achieve the deluxe costumes and devices. Indeed, to deserve with the reputation and belief of customers, company have to unceasingly create and innovate their products to bring the best things to the world. Nonetheless, for those who still have immature thoughts, especially the adolescent, it can generate a bad behavior when they unreasonably demand their parents to buy unnecessary expensive cellphones or clothes in order to show off with their friends.
• Brief, merchandises from famous trademarks brings to clients certain advantages, however, only purchasing them whenever we can afford by ourselves.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...th different brands, models, qualities. Most of people are willing to buy several things of re...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'toward the highest'.
Suggestion: toward the highest
...as built up from the trust of customers toward highest standards about durability, design, con...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...design and health protection. Moreover, most of people who belong in the upper strata of socie...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...people to work hard to become wealthier so as to achieve the deluxe costumes and devices...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em whenever we can afford by ourselves.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, well, as to, for example, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35737704918 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73421000049 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668852459016 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.456929904 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.545454545 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186029561973 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604473054107 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056385510802 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965197523151 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585019692903 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...th different brands, models, qualities. Most of people are willing to buy several things of re...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'toward the highest'.
Suggestion: toward the highest
...as built up from the trust of customers toward highest standards about durability, design, con...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...design and health protection. Moreover, most of people who belong in the upper strata of socie...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...people to work hard to become wealthier so as to achieve the deluxe costumes and devices...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em whenever we can afford by ourselves.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, well, as to, for example, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35737704918 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73421000049 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668852459016 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.456929904 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.545454545 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186029561973 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604473054107 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056385510802 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965197523151 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585019692903 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.