Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
People hold different views about how to deal with hard times in life. Some hold the opinion that accepting tough situations in life is the most useful attitude while I enunciate the idea that we had better attempt to go through difficult times.
On the one hand, some people might argue that enduring difficult circumstances instead of making changes is the best solution in certain cases. They point out that women who have young children should not change their career even when they are not satisfied with their job. Since motherhood is constant and exhausting, working mothers often have little time to fully devote to their job. This, in turn, makes them become more vulnerable in the job market and less likely to get hired when seeking employment. In addition, supporters of this view claim that difficulties in life such as financial problem is not unbearable experience. In fact, they can be solved satisfactorily by reducing one’s shopping expenditure, using public transportation or preparing homemade meals.
On the other hand, I personally believe that it is more beneficial for both individuals and society to improve undesirable situations rather than accept them. From a personal perspective, if individuals agree to have unsatisfactory working conditions or financial crisis, they are highly prone to excessive pressure and stress, which will adversely affect their health and their quality of life. Consequently, the progress of the entire country, not just individuals, will be held up. The reason is that every nation requires a skilled and healthy workforce in order to develop and thrive to success.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that people should always try to improve any negative circumstances instead of accepting them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, while, in addition, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29328621908 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82041226916 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667844522968 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3650792893 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164421492517 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498569045977 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435043531469 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910671924018 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123219999841 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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