Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is not only about sex, but also responsibility. Therefore, people should get married at above 21 instead of below 21 years old.
Youngster in the developing country have a tendency to get married after graduate from senior high school. Putting more simply, they seems to discontinue their education in college. The main reason for teenager to choose this option, because they can not control their desire to the opposite sex. But, this activity could be impact to divorce at early age. For example, in Indonesia, one of the biggest developing country in the world, many youngster get divorced at early age.
However, in the developed country, the case seems totally different. Most of people tends to get married at their productive age. They usually choose the path to be a career person in their work places. Several of them prefer to get married at thirty. Because, they think marriage is about responsibilty. It’s mean that, parents who have kids have an obligation to raise their children well and give the best education from kindergaten school until university. For example, in China, there is a regulation for people who have children to give food and forbid them to force their children hungry.
In coclusion, marriage is one way for people to be happy. But, marriage is not only about make in love with someone, but also to take full responsibilty for our couple and children. Where possible, the government should take an action to amend the law to forbid people to get married at below 21.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
... high school. Putting more simply, they seems to discontinue their education in colle...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...ntry, the case seems totally different. Most of people tends to get married at their productiv...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f them prefer to get married at thirty. Because, they think marriage is about responsib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.953125 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56734250901 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55078125 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7562033534 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5882352941 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22499124655 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805384484545 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920596283806 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159425262215 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430312788482 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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