some people say that giving aid to poor countries has more negative
effects than positive ones. To what txtent do you agree or disagree
In the morden world with the expeditious pace of globalization, besides developed countries, there are some poor countries in existence. giving support to these poor-quality countries is said to have more negative than positive ones. I disagree with this statement. In this essay i would like to mention why we have to help these countries to develop in a comprehensive way.
To begin with the negative of supporting to poor countries. All my truthfulness, there are some disadvantages when helping poor-quaility countries. Firstly, to have budget to slove problems about food,accommodations,.... Goverment from these underdeveloped countries have to lend funds from richer countries, from that these countries can be more depent on developed countries. Secondly, we are not sure that all helping funds are used in a correct way, maybe they are used for private purposes or incorrect ways, so that the economy does not improve more and so does people's life. Howerver, there are a number of adavantages when helping poor countries
To continue with the advantages that developed countries help imperfect countries all over the world.First of all , we are living in our own world, in my country there is an idiom that "The leaves protect tattered ones', that means when we have a convenience life, we should help unlucky people because we live in our own world, we must do that to help our world more and more growing. On top of that,the nations that help underdeveloped nations can have objective looks from others, they can attract foreign investment capital and from that they will more and more up and coming profession. Last but not least, helping poor countries is not only social but also educational, parents can educate their children how to treasure their life because they are luckier than some people and they can even do small things to cooperate people in poor countries, for instance, some foreign volunteers come to my country to support people who lived in flood areas. And helping poor countries has different ways.
Donating by budget might be the most effective way to assist people in imperfect countries. Nevertheless, we can give old clothes that still usable to them, i think this is an easiest because even children can do it. In addition, upgrading educative system in these poor countries also an important solution, foreign advanced educators can come to these nations and guide people about languages, lifestyles, ... More education more income.
In conclusion, supporting to numerous citizens in impoverished nations might has a few drawbacks but the advantages of this are exist obviously. In my opinion, helping someone or some countries to make them bettering is a good deed, maybe we need their helps later, so if we can, we should do that
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also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2346.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16740088106 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93315809936 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484581497797 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.53241598 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.473684211 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8947368421 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6842105263 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242741176796 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889467122395 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749048522996 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149083962581 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622142073623 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.