Some workers must work at night. What are the advantages and disadvantages of night-shift work? give reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays, some people who work at night are very popular in many companies. There are several advantages and disadvantages to this phenomenon. The advantage of night-shift work is that people can earn more money and help the company increase its profit. However, there are several disadvantages is that it’s very harmful to health and they don’t have more time for friends and family.
On the one hand, working at night help people earn more money. Because the workload is very large so some people have to work at night. The extra hours will be paid more than normal. Therefore, many people who have a worker also volunteer work extra hours to earn more money to cover expense for their life such as a rental house, cost expenses, internet, and so on,… Thank the workers who work extra houses, the company increases its profit because the product will be produced a lot, the company can respond to the needs of customers leading to making productivity will be significantly improved.
On the other hand, working at night makes the health of workers are very harmful. Due to working constantly for many hours, the worker will feel tired and stress. They are easily sicknesses and they can not continue to work. For example, last year, when I was a worker, I worked in the manufacturing department, I have to work constantly 12 hours in a week, I was very pressure and after I was sick and I had to sick leave. Additionally, the disadvantage of night-shift work is that people don’t have more time for friends and family because they have to get up early to work and come back late at home so they can not interact with other people. That makes them feel lonely and insensitivity.
In conclusion, working at night has some advantages and disadvantages. People should be a balance between work and private life. I recognize that people who work at night can earn more money and help the company succeed. Sometimes people should work at night if there are many workloads and you should spend time with many friends and family and enhance your heathy.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...ouse, cost expenses, internet, and so on,… Thank the workers who work extra houses...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78991596639 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5573600736 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453781512605 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.3914728304 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345042221085 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150023690888 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101696505383 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253358225186 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462718288581 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...ouse, cost expenses, internet, and so on,… Thank the workers who work extra houses...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78991596639 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5573600736 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453781512605 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.3914728304 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345042221085 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150023690888 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101696505383 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253358225186 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462718288581 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.