Task 2: Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments
rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that the governments rather than private companies should take responsibility for conducting and controlling scientific research. I completely concur with this opinion.
There are reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost, while research by private corporations puts the emphasis on maximising financial profits, the governments make use of scientific studies to benefit society as a whole. This can be illustrated by the governments’ environment-related studies on greenhouse effects, global warming and deforestation which all deal with urgent issues in the world. Additionally, without the control of the governments, private companies might be involved with illegal research such as nuclear or biological weapons, posing a serious threat to humankind. More importantly, the results of scientific research conducted by the governments are more reliable. As their research has a great impact on the public, the governments make their best efforts to ensure the accuracy of their research outcomes. In contrast, private orgnisations may highlight only the benefits of their products while neglecting the negative ones. For instance, companies like Starbuck only propagate the belief that coffee is beneficial to health so as to attract more consumers.
Granted, it is true that encouraging private companies to conduct scientific research could help lighten the financial burden on the governments and promote the freedom of researching in the scientific community. Still, I would like to emphasise that only with the governments’ control can the research results be guaranteed.
Considering all the arguments put forward, I have arrived at the conclusion that it is much better to let the governments control and conduct scientific studies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1066, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ief that coffee is beneficial to health so as to attract more consumers. Granted, it ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, still, while, as to, for instance, in contrast, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76136363636 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31350637467 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2072017864 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210289949629 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777973947312 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699179067998 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149427422443 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553303965321 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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