Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents. Do you agree or disagree
Parenting is a gifted talent from God. However, in my point of view, it is necessary for all the parents to attend a child care training course due to an array of reasons.
Initially, in this technology driven world, parents are leading a busy life schedule, that disables them to spend time with their dearones. Rather than spending time with parents, a major portion of an infant's childhood days are dispensed at playschools and kindergartens as their parents are busy with tight work schedules. Consequently, children will lack the moral values, love and care from their parents which are inevitable for a child at this stage of life. As per the Indian childline help center, it is clear that more than 50% of the juvenile crimes are reported from children who lack the moral values, care and support from their parents. so, in order to make the parents aware of the need for spending time with the children a childcare training program is mandatory.
In addition to that, it is necessary for the parents to get trained on the friendly methods to look after their children. Instead of being rude, it is important for the parents to be more friendly and less stick with children. This is because children are likely to get emotional, mentally harassed and hurt by the rude behaviour of their parents. For instance, as per survey conducted by WHO is it revealed that about 40% of children bellow the age of 15 are mentally disturbed by the rash and aggressive behavior of their parents. Thus, instead of imposing strict rules on children, parents should be given enough training to build a friendly relationship with their wards.
To conclude, having considered all the points elaborated above, it seems sensible for me to claim that, childcare training programs are mandatory in order to make the parents aware of the need for giving proper care and to train the parents to be more friendly with their children than being strict.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87009063444 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5398243689 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495468277946 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.695886573 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197953239974 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792575532978 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658510161187 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145564417856 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591200376581 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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