To the environmental project manager to offer your help
Dear Sir,
I have just heard about your environment projects which are advertised in the local newspaper. I am really keen on giving you a hand on these projects at the place I am living. Therefore, I am writing to you with a view to offering some helps.
The most serious problem which local habitants are suffering is noise pollution. From several months ago until now, there is increasing number of karaoke clubs built in my town. It creates a lot of noise which affects negatively citizens, specially the elder and kids. They find it difficult to get deep sleeps; hence they always feel stressful.
From the terrible issue, I propose that these harmful activities need to be stopped immediately. To solve this problem, I would like to participate in the projects as a member who can organize meetings among local people, authority and club managers in order to discuss the problem and find out the best solution to limit its bad effects. Besides, in the future, to avoid meeting this state, we should convince the mayor pass strict regulations on club activities. For example, these clubs are only allowed working from after 9 a. m to before 9 p. m except lunch time.
I hope that my suggestion for these environmental projects is seriously considered. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Hoang,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, look, may, really, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87665198238 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68806226565 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68281938326 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1308065162 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1875 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152239738821 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401090849779 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565207302714 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807278384026 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596586425764 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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