It is unquestionable for some people to make more income rather than spare time. Others claimed that is not the case bacuse leisure time is crucial and more that anything else. The topic is highly debatable so I will discuss both sides and share my opinion.
Facing deadline tasks and targets, which one’s have job in ureban area in particularly, fulfilled workloads are forced people work overtime in order to earn more salary. Without ample rest and family time, happiness will be superseded in terms of meeting their week or month achievement. Life is not balanced. Another significant argument in favor is that health problems will be caused by long time working hours. It will become a diaster if people even do not have time to purchase health insurance. For example, it commonly watch some related news on TV, which is employee consistent work over 24 hours and go to hospital finally. The quality of life worst that ever because the whole family have to look after him or her.
On contrary, the fundamental point of making wages is to gain basic needs not concerntrate on income or bank balance, making more time could lead life flexible and enjoyable, which is the reason for people who live in comtenporary society with huge improved technology, to find and identify what is the real meanning of living. In another words, people work for themselves not only for money.
In conclusion, in modern society, life should be balanced so have more time is preferable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'watches'?
Suggestion: watches
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91633466135 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56288351874 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641434262948 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7328501806 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9230769231 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233247155451 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798921353939 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525713600479 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151542523642 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505126028084 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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