International air fares are falling and tourism is growing. What are advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity ?
Travel refresh mind and soul.In the burgeoning era, where people are working for ,long hours and under stress.So in order To refresh and incursion,they travel to different places frequently.So tourism is growing at a swift pace.This essay will outline the merits and demerits of this approach.
Increased tourism has plethora of reasons for downfall of air tickets.To begin with, travel give opportunity for exchange of culture and ideas.When variety of ideas will mix with each other,it would results in change of living standards,thoughts process and different approach towards the life.Secondly,tourism will increase employment opportunities to the people of destination places.In this contest visitors spend money on shopping,sight-seeing and various leisure activities.So all these jobs will be managed by native people and it ultimately will boost the economy of the nation.Hospitality industry,foreign exchange department will take the economy on developing path.For any instance nations lie Singapore,Dubai and Malaysia are heavily depend upon tourism business. Moreover this will help in maintaining harmonious relation nations and would boost trade among countries
On the flip side,it has adverse effect too,unwanted tourism result in inevitable disputes and conflicts between people.Moreover this will disturb the peace of a country.Legal activities are the result of movement of people from one place to another place.Even theses activities would create discrimination among people.For an instance a survey has been conducted by a leading Newspaper claiming that 30% of the resources are wasted by tourism and leads to scarcity of resources during natural calamities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91803278689 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51317968086 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647540983607 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 20.2975951904 399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.273701607 49.4020404114 405% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 481.333333333 106.682146367 451% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.3333333333 20.7667163134 392% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.3333333333 7.06120827912 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11977632728 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769416274781 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231189330016 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787181001045 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266700045195 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.1 13.0946893788 360% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.66 50.2224549098 -55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.2 11.3001002004 329% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.24 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.61 8.58950901804 158% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 10.1190380762 340% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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