It is sometimes said that the countryside offers a high quality of life, especially for families. What are the arguments for and against families choosing to live and work in the countryside, for example as farmers? What is your own view about this?
Some people say that countryside provide better quality of live to families. Whereas there is huge difference between life of rural and Urban areas. I believe that even though countryside has its own positives but city provides more opportunities and insights to an individual.
Admittedly, living in countryside has various rewards which go beyond material considerations. There is less pollution and fresh air which uplifts the health of the people. In other words, people living in these areas are dependent on forestry rather than industries due to which there is less pollution. In addition, all the vegetables are free from pesticides which is cultivated by the farmers for their own consumption. Furthermore, if parent is living in countryside then children can also learn various things, such as crop rotation and animal husbandry.
It is evident that city life provides multitude of education and entertainment options. In India, for instance, all the smart schools are located in Urban areas only. If people from countryside do not migrate to city for education then they will not be able to get proper education as there are lack of educational facilities in Urban areas, mostly in Asia. Moreover, city dwellers are more technology driven as people in cities have entirely moved from manual learning to machine learning. Though moving to city will help to keep them updated and eventually, their living standard will improve.
In conclusion, life in countryside has its own perks, but Urban life is better as it has more amenities which help in overall growth of the individual. To add, their are ample of resources in cities such as electricity and water which enables them to live a happy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1541218638 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80140489304 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2731398466 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153622282934 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054201084027 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401427464117 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965232996301 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131682087938 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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