Recently more and more children feel pressure from their parents to be successful in the future. In this essay, I will write about the possible causes why parents put such pressure on their children as well as about the advantages and disadvantages of this development.
One of the obvious causes brought about this development is that it has become significantly difficult to find a job. Finding a job without making any efforts is so difficult that, for example, some parents do not indulge but train their children in a strict manner so that the children understand the importance of endurance. Without such discipline, it is not surprising if a child would be a failure in his or her adult life. Another reason for this development is that nowadays parents tend to have fewer children. Today more and more both parents work, or it costs more to bring up children, and as a result, the number of children in a family is decreasing. Previously parents’ expectations were shared among siblings but now fewer children are burdened with all of them.
One advantage of this development is, obviously, children today would be more persevering and resilient than ones in former days were. As I wrote above, children already know a lot of things about the importance of perseverance and resilience since they are young. The more they know the importance through the pressure from their parents, the more they make efforts, and they become successful in their future. However, such pressure from parents can be dangerous at times. There are a not-so-small number of children who are mentally disordered as they cannot withstand the pressure, especially they are at puberty. Some suffer from depression or, in the worst case scenario, commit suicide.
All in all, pressure from parents have made it easier that their children live in the harsh world of reality, but at the same time, we should be aware that there are dangers behind such pressure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a strict manner" with adverb for "strict"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99693251534 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74615268807 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530674846626 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2440333742 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293725891195 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105671451802 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969664747263 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190448672169 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834854887195 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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