Some companies push employees to retire after they pass middle age. Others allow employees to stay untill they want to retire. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
Nowadays, some companies often push employees to retire after they pass middle age. In my opinion, I prefer to allow employees to continue working at a company until they want to retire as they have more experience, they have more motivation to work harder and they are very prudent and careful.
Firstly, people who pass middle age are more experienced because they have been working for a long time so they have gained many skills and knowledge. Moreover, they’re professional in their position. It’s too easy to complete the deadline on time. Additionally, they could share their experience with employees who don’t have more experience or understand about the company and positions. For example, last year, I graduated from college, I got a job at ABC company. At that time, I was just a newbie so I don’t more experience. Thank experienced staff, I could learn many things from them and now I am a good worker.
Secondly, people who pass middle age frequently have more motivation to work harder because they are too old to others, they don’t have the agility and they don’t have more active and flexible anymore so that they have to effort a lot. That leads to increasing more profits for the business. Otherwise, young workers aren’t often responsible for their work, they’re usually delayed. Therefore, experience workers usually try to enhance their performance and contribute to the company's success.
Lastly, people who are senior staff are very prudent and careful because when they pass middle age, they will see the problem very carefully. They want to make sure all the problems, they don’t want to have a mistake until it’s very small. They have been working for a long time so they understand that they make a decision slowly be better to a mistake so that’s very helpful if the company keeps them stay at a company.
In conclusion, pushing or staying is beneficial or not depending much on the view of a person. I prefer to keep employees to continue working at a company until they want to retire as they have more experience, they have more motivation and they are very prudent and careful.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90883977901 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59402855767 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461325966851 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2939674784 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7222222222 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327386820045 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123475755521 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134034148163 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252615416405 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126711056728 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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