Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
There is no doubt that the advertisement has entered in every field of life but there are some advertising methods which are immoral and cannot be accepted by civilized societies. I strongly believe that advertisement has taken the shape which is unsolicitous and insidious and therefore, it cannot be encouraged. This essay will first discuss how advertisement has been badly affected our young generation, and then discuss it from the perspective of social problems that have been created by it.
Advertisement of tobacco and alcoholic products has long been a controversial issue, yet, in many countries, restrictions are not being imposed on advert of alcoholic products by the Government in the same way as on cigarettes .therefore, it is quite possible that their advertisement is encouraging excessive and underage drinking. for example, a recent report of the newspaper revealed that consumption of liquor in youngsters as increased a lot than the previous year, just because of fancy advertisement.
Another aspect of the advertisement that I think unethical is that it encourages people to buy things which they do not need or they cannot afford them. Children and particularly girls are being enticed by the attractive advertisement to buy expensive toys and clothes, and it increases financial pressure on parents. Moreover, advertising boards of these kinds of products are placed by the companies on our streets. As they are made of components which are not disposable, streets are becoming full of litter.
In conclusion, companies with the latest technology have found the ways to violate our personal space, and they are dangerous, intrusive and irritating at the same time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34701492537 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13294879021 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.589855408 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.3 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119200426875 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043811063349 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359233456543 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627924735234 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338083050527 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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