There have been some conflicting views about whether the great lecture is the reason making education results more success or the efforts from students themselves are vital to contribute the results. I am unsure which ideas is much more reasonable, and will, therefore, examine the both sides in this essay.
From examination perspective, to grasp a good test results is the essense of the success in education. Adolescent is the the period which missing and finding themselves, resulting youngsters unaware their behaviours. In the class, they sometime against the orders from teacher, making study result cannot be good.
Moreover, students pay attention on the class is coming self-awareness and self-dicipline, without that students hard to achieve learning goals.
Despite the advantage, a good teacher who has the hig-teaching skills can change the class environment or student behaviours. They may observe and find the methods to encourage or motivati their students. For instance, I never concentrate on the class whey I was student, I slept on boring political class, however a astonishing teacher who use thier amzing teaching skill changed the me listening on his class all the time. It amazed me a lot. Moreover, good teacher can become friend with student. For example, in the move "dead poets society", all the students in the class see the teacher as their life mentor not just a teacher who teach them some boring knowledge.
In conlusion, I think students behaviour and attitudes are essential but how teacher foster the young fellows is the key to success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'result'?
Suggestion: result
...ation perspective, to grasp a good test results is the essense of the success in educat...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...the success in education. Adolescent is the the period which missing and finding themse...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...the success in education. Adolescent is the the period which missing and finding themse...
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Line 6, column 316, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...lept on boring political class, however a astonishing teacher who use thier amzin...
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Line 6, column 382, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'me'?
Suggestion: the; me
...use thier amzing teaching skill changed the me listening on his class all the time. It...
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Line 6, column 557, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the move 'dead poets society', all the students in the class see the te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27952755906 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85765215384 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637795275591 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0233348661 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197958383793 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692927084572 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549615137745 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108198189147 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446270052369 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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